IELTS Writing Task 1(Sample Answer)

There have been some problems with public transport In your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
• describe the problems
• explain how these problems are affecting the public
• suggest what changes could be made

 

I am writing this to inform you about a severe problem with the transport corporation buses, running on route 10Z, in Hyderabad.

Let me explain the issue in more detail. Due to the ongoing construction along the main road near Narayanaguda circle, all the buses with route number 10Z are not running on their usual route, which starts from the Afzalgunj bus stop and end at Secundrabad bus depot. These buses are rather running on a different route to reach the final destination of Secundrabad, avoiding all the important locations where many stops for offices and colleges are located.

Consequently, several passengers, especially daily commuters like students, who travel on this route, are facing huge problems. The difficulty is further amplified because there are no metro train routes for reaching many important destinations that are along this famous bus route. As a result, many of the commuters have to pay hefty prices to hire auto rickshaw and taxis to reach to their respective workplaces.

 

Would you kindly consider my request to arrange alternate routes along the original 10Z route, which will avoid the span of the road where the construction is going on, but will follow the rest of the original 10Z route? In this way, there would be a huge relief for the passengers, especially the students who have to reach their colleges every day.

 

Thanks for your consideration.

 

Yours sincerely,

Sam

(Word count-238)

 

 

Estimated Band Score-7.0

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August 15, 2020