IELTS Writing Task 1(Sample Answer)

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers were very good. You want to tell him how your feel

Write a letter to the singer, in Your letter

> say how you feel about his performance

> give details of your musical activities

> explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Freddy,
I hope you are doing well. The reason I am writing this letter is to let you know about your exceptional performance at the Bondi Beach resort concert earlier this month.
While I was listening to your performance, not only did I enjoy it but I was also moved by the lyrics. The lyrics along with your vocals made it seem as though you wrote the song from your personal experience. Towards the end of the song, I nearly teared up and that is when I realized I wanted to become like you.
I just started my career in the music industry and wanted to learn more about how to sing. As a songwriter and singer, I can completely relate when a song is taken from personal life experience. I have performed in small-town shows and concerts within my community; however, I now want to grow further.
As I am starting my music career, I was wondering if you can take me in under your wing as an apprentice so that I can learn from the best in this industry. I also want to learn the guitar, just like how you played it on stage that day.
Thank you for your consideration and I hope, I can learn from you as a trainee.
Yours sincerely,

Estimated Band Score-6.5

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August 27, 2020
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